Monday, November 5, 2012
Dragon by the Nile, by Big Sister: Part One
Mandisa! Stop pulling Kosey’s tail!” cried Halima. Her baby sister just giggled, and grabbed a handful of the cat’s yellowish fur. Kosey put his ears back flat against his head, then wriggled free and sprang out the door, where Halima’s mother had just a appeared. She looked at Halima’s hot, frustrated face. “I’ll watch Mandisa now, and you can go get some bread,” she said, handing Halima some coins. “You may as well take Dakarai and Amil.” Dakarai and Amil were the youngest of Halima’s four brothers. They had to stay at home, while the older two, Nakhti and Mensah, were old enough to work in the fields with their father.
Halima was soon trotting down the dusty road towards the marketplace, the warm damp hands of her brothers held tightly in hers. By the time they got home it was dusk, and Halima’s brothers, along with her father, had returned from the fields. Mensah, who at ten years of age was two years younger than Halima, was bursting with news.
“Have you heard about the dragon?” he asked, his eyes shining with excitement. Halima shook her head.
“Well, I’ll tell you then. A man named Gudu -or was it Habu?- was cutting reeds when a huge dragon rose out of the depths of the Nile! They say it was the size of the great pyramid, had eyes like great pools of fire and gigantic teeth sharper than arrows.” Mensah paused for effect.
“What happened?” Halima’s eyes were wide. This was not like Mensah’s usual stories of robberies or new babies.
“Just as it was about to eat the man all up, he threw his scythe in its mouth and ran away as fast as he could to warn everyone. But when they went to search for it.... it had disappeared into thin air. So the dragon is still alive-- and somewhere in Egypt!’’
Friday, November 2, 2012
Dragon by the Nile, by Big Sister: Prologue
The air shimmered beneath the hot Egyptian sun. It was noon, the hottest time of the day, and few people moved about the marketplace of Menes. The cloth-seller, a little man with a wide mouth, wiped his hand across his damp forehead. He had just settled down comfortably for a lunch break when a man, wild-eyed and covered in mud, came hurtling into the square and flung himself into the cloth-seller’s stall.
The cloth-seller gave a shout of dismay and dropped his lunch. His lovely cloth was all covered in mud! The cloth-seller, pale with rage, began to sputter dire threats. “Out! Out or- or I’ll feed you to the crocodiles!” People began to hurry over to see what all the fuss was about.
“Alright, alright, what’s going on here?” The rather large figure of Sekani the baker shoved his way into the stall.
“This man has just muddied my cloth!” wailed the cloth-seller.
“What happened, eh?” Sekani asked the man.
“I saw... I saw... Ra save us!” was the man’s only reply. Sekani turned to crowd of people. “Anyone got some beer?” Beer was soon supplied, which revived the man enough to be able to sit up and stop shaking- almost.
“Now,” said Sekani, “what’s your name? And what caused you to be so frightened as to rush about like a madman-” Sekani waved his arm over the muddied cloth- “destroying things?”
The man gulped. “M-my name is Manu. And I was frightened because I saw a dragon!”
Sekani laughed. “A dragon? Impossible. No one has seen one of those for hundreds of years!” He looked at Manu curiously. “However, you obviously saw something, so do go on.”
Manu complied. “I was cutting reeds on the bank of the Nile when I heard a strange sound behind me, turned to look- and lo! Rising from the Nile’s water I saw a huge creature with enormous yellow eyes and skin like that of a crocodile. It opened its mouth, and I saw rows and rows of huge, white teeth--”
“It must have been a dragon! What else could it be?” gasped the cloth-seller.
Sekani frowned. “I have a Jewish servant who is always telling stories,” he said slowly. “About so-called dragons. Previously I ignored them as ridiculous, but if what you say is true...” he paused.
The cloth-seller’s eyes were starting from his head. “Go on, go on!”
“He said they were big enough to hold an entire man in their mouth, and that they had a tail like a- what was it? Some sort of tree...not olive or palm... ah yes, I remember! a tail like a cedar tree!”
The cloth-seller gave a shout of dismay and dropped his lunch. His lovely cloth was all covered in mud! The cloth-seller, pale with rage, began to sputter dire threats. “Out! Out or- or I’ll feed you to the crocodiles!” People began to hurry over to see what all the fuss was about.
“Alright, alright, what’s going on here?” The rather large figure of Sekani the baker shoved his way into the stall.
“This man has just muddied my cloth!” wailed the cloth-seller.
“What happened, eh?” Sekani asked the man.
“I saw... I saw... Ra save us!” was the man’s only reply. Sekani turned to crowd of people. “Anyone got some beer?” Beer was soon supplied, which revived the man enough to be able to sit up and stop shaking- almost.
“Now,” said Sekani, “what’s your name? And what caused you to be so frightened as to rush about like a madman-” Sekani waved his arm over the muddied cloth- “destroying things?”
The man gulped. “M-my name is Manu. And I was frightened because I saw a dragon!”
Sekani laughed. “A dragon? Impossible. No one has seen one of those for hundreds of years!” He looked at Manu curiously. “However, you obviously saw something, so do go on.”
Manu complied. “I was cutting reeds on the bank of the Nile when I heard a strange sound behind me, turned to look- and lo! Rising from the Nile’s water I saw a huge creature with enormous yellow eyes and skin like that of a crocodile. It opened its mouth, and I saw rows and rows of huge, white teeth--”
“It must have been a dragon! What else could it be?” gasped the cloth-seller.
Sekani frowned. “I have a Jewish servant who is always telling stories,” he said slowly. “About so-called dragons. Previously I ignored them as ridiculous, but if what you say is true...” he paused.
The cloth-seller’s eyes were starting from his head. “Go on, go on!”
“He said they were big enough to hold an entire man in their mouth, and that they had a tail like a- what was it? Some sort of tree...not olive or palm... ah yes, I remember! a tail like a cedar tree!”
Saturday, September 29, 2012
"A Tale Short, Yet Clever," by Lauren
Once there was a mouse
and he lived
in
a
house.
Got chased by a cat
hid under
the mat
and was trodden on,
by a large and hairy man.
The man said
"By george! There's something
under
the mat!"
And he looked--
and there was the mouse
squished flat.
Said his wife:
"Disgusting! I won't allow it!"
and she threw
them both
out of the house.
--The End--
Saturday, September 1, 2012
Letter from a Criminal
The fifth day of April, 1888
From: Jack Montville
Cell 66, Fleet prison
London
To: Miss Lacey Montville
450 Shade Tree Lane
Glasgow, Scotland
6783
450 Shade Tree Lane
Glasgow, Scotland
6783
My Dearest
sister Lacey:
I cannot begin to tell you of the
pain and remorse I feel. You and mother
must be so ashamed. Because of me,
people will whisper when you walk by, and stare as though you were the criminals - as though it were your fault! Oh, the injustice of it!
The thing I cannot understand is
this: if what I did hadn’t turned out
so badly, and I wasn’t sent to this awful place, then people would perhaps
shake their heads a little, but they would find it easy to forgive - and to
forget.
Yet, because the man happened to
die later, I will be forever detested, and looked down upon as though I was
something very unpleasant from the dustbin.
God can forgive, but people, it seems, cannot. And even if someone was to forgive me, they
will always remember. It will always be
a dark stain upon my record – both literally and in the minds of my fellow
men.
I will not even tell you the
things he said about father, it would only make you upset. The things he said were terrible, and they
were lies, all of them. If I had a better
hold on myself I could have calmly replied and left, but I have never been
able to do that.
You asked me to tell you what it
was like here, and I will not refuse you.
The nights are freezing cold, and my pitiful excuse for a blanket does
not provide sufficient warmth. And the
food, if it could be called that, seems to have no more goodness than
sawdust. It certainly does not taste
any better.
We are let out for “exercise”
twice a day; and it is good to see other faces, but we cannot speak.
I am lonely, dear sister. The
jailer is about as talkative as a stone, and my only company is a large, fat mouse I call
Albert, who comes each day for a crust, and a robin who sings outside my
window every morning.
How is mother? It makes me ill just thinking about how dreadful
it must be for her. Oh why, why must my terrible temper always get
the better of me? I pushed that man with all my might. I did not wish to hurt him – I didn’t even
expect that he would fall. But he did,
and now there is no going back.
I have some news for you. I’ve been keeping it till now because I did
not know how to tell you. I have decided that when I am released, I will not
be coming home. I have decided to go to
Australia. People there will not know
me, and I can make a fresh start. I
know it will be hard for you, but I believe it is the best thing to do. I think you should tell mother straight
away, before she starts wanting to see me again.
I will miss you both. In fact, I
miss you already. Perhaps- perhaps, one
day we shall meet again. I hope so.
With all my love,
Jack
Note: I wrote this early in the year for schoolwork, and then proceeded to forget all about it. Recently I found it amongst my papers, and thought I'd post it. :)
-B
Monday, August 13, 2012
Rose Buds in the Bush - God Will Provide, by Lauren: Part 3
Darcie and Charlotte laid their father to rest exactly one week after they arrived. The scenery around the town which at first seemed friendly, now was cold, lonely and empty.
The sister's walked back home silent, each absorbed in her own thoughts, when Darcie interrupted the quietness.
"Charlotte, what will we do? We have very little money and no provisions, you know we can't take over Papa's job, and we have no property to farm."
"God will provide," Charlotte replied more confidently then she felt.
The next day was the Sabbath so they couldn't work. Darcie cooked the last of the provisions, while Charlotte, trying to concentrate on the Holy Word, fretted. They had no peace of mind that night.
The next morning a handsome stranger appeared on the doorstep. He was in his early twenties, with the rough, weathered appreance of a hard worker with kind hazel eyes and dark curly hair. He introduced himself as Darrell Adams.
Darcie welcomed him in and listened to the reason of his visit. "Probably to give his condolences," she thought.
"Ma'am, I am sorry about your loss and I give my condolences to you and your sister," he started as he got quickly to the point, "As a God-fearing man, I believe it is the duty of a congration to support their pastor, and the duty of the men to take care of his daughters. I have come to offer my help and service."
"Thank you," was all Charlotte could manage as Darcie stood speechless.
"Charlotte was right," she mused, "God has provided."
Charlotte went to bed that night with a thankful heart, Darrell had given them enough food to last weeks, and she was no longer afraid of winter.
Darcie, however, could only think of the young man's kindness and the tender look in the eye he gave her.
The sister's walked back home silent, each absorbed in her own thoughts, when Darcie interrupted the quietness.
"Charlotte, what will we do? We have very little money and no provisions, you know we can't take over Papa's job, and we have no property to farm."
"God will provide," Charlotte replied more confidently then she felt.
The next day was the Sabbath so they couldn't work. Darcie cooked the last of the provisions, while Charlotte, trying to concentrate on the Holy Word, fretted. They had no peace of mind that night.
The next morning a handsome stranger appeared on the doorstep. He was in his early twenties, with the rough, weathered appreance of a hard worker with kind hazel eyes and dark curly hair. He introduced himself as Darrell Adams.
Darcie welcomed him in and listened to the reason of his visit. "Probably to give his condolences," she thought.
"Ma'am, I am sorry about your loss and I give my condolences to you and your sister," he started as he got quickly to the point, "As a God-fearing man, I believe it is the duty of a congration to support their pastor, and the duty of the men to take care of his daughters. I have come to offer my help and service."
"Thank you," was all Charlotte could manage as Darcie stood speechless.
"Charlotte was right," she mused, "God has provided."
Charlotte went to bed that night with a thankful heart, Darrell had given them enough food to last weeks, and she was no longer afraid of winter.
Darcie, however, could only think of the young man's kindness and the tender look in the eye he gave her.
Wednesday, August 8, 2012
Rose Buds in The Bush - The Price of Peace, by Lauren: Part 2
"I declare, this sun will spoil my skin and produce freckles on my nose," remarked Darcie.
"Well, at least we'll hardly have to worry about frost-bite in winter," replied Charlotte.
"Still we have to make the best of it since father had to be the preacher of the district, and the worst possible thing would be for us to separate."
"Yes, we need father and he needs us especially since mother,... mother...,"
"Died," whispered Darcie.
"She would have wanted us to stay together," replied Charlotte.
After working on their little homestead, Mr Rose announced that he would take a look at the church building and see what repairs were needed. Darcie was to stay at the homestead to clean and do what-ever was necessary to turn the run-down building into a liveable home. Charlotte wanted to help her father with the church's building, so she walked along the road, hand-in-hand with the pastor and father she loved.
After deciding what needed to be done, and tidying up the place, an urgent messenger arrived.
"Sir," he said holding his hat, "we have no sheriff in this town, and two men have held up the banker, and that banker, sir, is as stubborn as a mule and as stupid as an goose, he won't give the men that they want."
"What can I do about it?"
"Can you kinda smooth things over?"
Mr Rose pondered, bowed his head, and nodded.
"Yes I'll come in a minute, Charlotte you must go back home to Darcie, this is an order, you mustn't be involved."
Charlotte obeyed and started off on the lonely walk home. An uncomfortable prickly feeling soon got the better of her, and before she knew it, her legs were running back towards the town.
"Imagine what Darcie would think of me running" she thought.
Charlotte had little time to think much more about the matter, for at that moment was a gun shot; a horrible cry; and nothing more.
Unable to think of anything more then her father's safety, Charlotte ran inside the bank.
Mr Rose was slumped against the wall, dead.
"Well, at least we'll hardly have to worry about frost-bite in winter," replied Charlotte.
"Still we have to make the best of it since father had to be the preacher of the district, and the worst possible thing would be for us to separate."
"Yes, we need father and he needs us especially since mother,... mother...,"
"Died," whispered Darcie.
"She would have wanted us to stay together," replied Charlotte.
After working on their little homestead, Mr Rose announced that he would take a look at the church building and see what repairs were needed. Darcie was to stay at the homestead to clean and do what-ever was necessary to turn the run-down building into a liveable home. Charlotte wanted to help her father with the church's building, so she walked along the road, hand-in-hand with the pastor and father she loved.
After deciding what needed to be done, and tidying up the place, an urgent messenger arrived.
"Sir," he said holding his hat, "we have no sheriff in this town, and two men have held up the banker, and that banker, sir, is as stubborn as a mule and as stupid as an goose, he won't give the men that they want."
"What can I do about it?"
"Can you kinda smooth things over?"
Mr Rose pondered, bowed his head, and nodded.
"Yes I'll come in a minute, Charlotte you must go back home to Darcie, this is an order, you mustn't be involved."
Charlotte obeyed and started off on the lonely walk home. An uncomfortable prickly feeling soon got the better of her, and before she knew it, her legs were running back towards the town.
"Imagine what Darcie would think of me running" she thought.
Charlotte had little time to think much more about the matter, for at that moment was a gun shot; a horrible cry; and nothing more.
Unable to think of anything more then her father's safety, Charlotte ran inside the bank.
Mr Rose was slumped against the wall, dead.
Saturday, August 4, 2012
Rose Buds in the Bush - Coolanna's Grave, by Lauren: Part 1
On a hot summer's afternoon, a stranger stepped out of the Cob & Co stagecoach and into the tiny town of Coolanna in the Australian outback. After circling the area he was dropped off at, just to check his Grandmother was not there, he took a walk around the town.
For some strange reason or another, Craig felt an urge to walk through the church's cemetery. Out of the many memorial places, one stood out from the rest, and written on the stone were the words...
For some strange reason or another, Craig felt an urge to walk through the church's cemetery. Out of the many memorial places, one stood out from the rest, and written on the stone were the words...
'Rose Buds in the Bush'
Darcie and Charlotte Rose
1804-1895 1805-1895
Died during service
R.I.P
"I thought you wouldn't have wanted to wait for me, and go wandering" Said the gruff voice of Mrs A. Jonson, Craig's grandmother. "Though I never would have guessed you'd wander here."
"Sorry Grandmother,' Craig replied, "but who were they?" Guestering towards the gravestone.
"The Rose sisters?" The old lady said with a hint of emotion in her voice.
Craig nodded.
"Well then, it's a long drive to my place, so I'll tell you on the way.
'It was a summer much like this one in 1820. Two English Sisters and their father arrived in Coolanner.
Darcie was a handsome, tall young lady of sixteen with a slim figure, dark eyes and long, brown hair. Her younger sister Charlotte, was shorter and rounder, but had pretty blue eyes, blond curly hair and fair skin. Personality wise they were also different. Charlotte loved laughing heartily, while Darcie was very ladylike and graceful. However no one denied their special sisterly bond. They loved each other and their father very much...'
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This story was co-authored by my friend Ebony, please visit her blog, she is a creative genius with many talents, one of which is photography.
Monday, July 2, 2012
Ehem!
Dear readers of Just So Stories,
I just thought I'd tell you that the "Farewell" post was just a practical joke between Lauren and I, and it isn't serious! xD Just in case you were wondering what on earth was going on, hehe! :)
Love from Big Sister <3
I just thought I'd tell you that the "Farewell" post was just a practical joke between Lauren and I, and it isn't serious! xD Just in case you were wondering what on earth was going on, hehe! :)
Love from Big Sister <3
Saturday, June 30, 2012
Farewell...
Dear friends, followers, and others...
I am going to leave Just So Stories, because Lauren and Alice are simply much better writers then I am...(Lauren is especialy amazing, oh yes, I'm quite ashamed of myself yes I am, I am not NEARLY as good as HER!! She is amazing, oho yes!)
I will try to use this post to express my sadness of leaving, and my gratitude of dear Lauren and Alice keeping me on this blog so long. They are sooo patient, and have put up with a lot.
But it would take too long to go into all the details, so now I will close off-
So long, farewell, adveisaint goodbye...
Love Makenzie
I am going to leave Just So Stories, because Lauren and Alice are simply much better writers then I am...(Lauren is especialy amazing, oh yes, I'm quite ashamed of myself yes I am, I am not NEARLY as good as HER!! She is amazing, oho yes!)
I will try to use this post to express my sadness of leaving, and my gratitude of dear Lauren and Alice keeping me on this blog so long. They are sooo patient, and have put up with a lot.
But it would take too long to go into all the details, so now I will close off-
So long, farewell, adveisaint goodbye...
Love Makenzie
Friday, June 15, 2012
Interview @ Jilla
Hello everyone!
Lauren has recently done an interview with the authors of this blog (Big Sister, Elizabeth and myself) about reading and writing over at her blog, Jilla. Here's the link if you'd like to go and check it out!
Sorry about the lack of stories lately-- we have all been rather busy with various things! We're working on it...
Till then, adieus!
Alice x
Lauren has recently done an interview with the authors of this blog (Big Sister, Elizabeth and myself) about reading and writing over at her blog, Jilla. Here's the link if you'd like to go and check it out!
Sorry about the lack of stories lately-- we have all been rather busy with various things! We're working on it...
Till then, adieus!
Alice x
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